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12.19.2006

1st Portfolio submission

It's finally done. I can't say that i'm thrilled, in fact i'm not even adequately satisfied with the final results. but, i have learnt, and i still feel that i have potential , which is important. I had my portfolio judging, which was 5 photography faculty grading my portfolio and giving me feedback. The general consensus was that i could have done better, i think. ( which i already knew, being a perfectionist, and having experienced a very rough semester ). the constructive criticism that i will learn from is that images 1,2,5,and 8 have a style emerging, signature to me, that i should have followed. the rest of the images don't fit in to the portfolio as editorial portraits. there could have possibly been another, or sub portfolio made up of black & white images. the criticism i will not learn from: none of the 5 (male) teachers liked image 9, declaring it was too harsh and they didn't understand it. It is one of my favourite images, i find it is beautiful and a good editorial, and i'm not the only one (female), who felt that. Something that surprised me: that image 5 was counted as one of my strongest images, when i had just decided to put it in at the last minute instead of Martine. image 10 was another final call, and perhaps not the best choice, though that may also have to do with the print quality/and my photoshop skills. To sum up, i had to pick up quite a few pieces after the judging, but my philosophy remains water tight, i am in school to learn, and i musn't expect perfection. i must also not be too hard on myself, and keep dreaming, pushing to pull the best creativity and skill out of myself. One more portfolio to go......... and then the rest of my life to perfect my art.

4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I guess my other comment wasn't posted. anyways, i just read your blog above and want to say taste is totally subjective cause my favourites are not the same as the teachers. It is good that you are takin it with a grain of salt and realize they are male teachers. i will have to show you all the 17 positive comments from different people about your photo. on top of that there were good feedback in person that wasn't written down. bon courage mon cherie! fiox

2:02 AM

 
Blogger Snoozie said...

Photo 9 is completely unlike most pregnant women photos, that portray the woman in classic goddess fashion, as the epitome of femininity, filled with grace and peace and a sense of balance. Your picture exhibits the fear and uncertainty that come with bearing children; it's real and in depth, not just an ideal portrait of what motherhood should be, or what it is at times. You show the other side, which is wonderful as well, and shouldn't be hidden.

PS- see you soon! I still can't believe you're coming! It'll be wonderful to see you again.

4:57 PM

 
Blogger Leah said...

Thanks Fiona! i saw all the comments on your myspace, wow! it takes a lovely model, too. have a wonderful christmas, i have the cd ready for you just give me a call in the new year. you were one of my fave photo shoots.

Roxanne, yah, i guess the reason i find 9 so beautiful is because i find vulnerability and " realness" beautiful.
can't wait to see you, we'll have to have snow/sauna time!!!!

7:26 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Leah, I am so proud of you. I really like your portfolio..it makes me 'feel', which is what I have always loved about your work. I am most proud of your attitude about it all...

Cheering you on,
Sue

7:48 PM

 

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